Angelic Aviator
Abandoned by his mother, refusing to eat, a baby monkey courted death in a Chinese animal hospital. A fellow patient, a white pigeon, took him under her wing. Love matters. Fear fading, his arms cradling, he enjoyed a tender embrace. Near the fallen brittle leaves, revived by the love a bird, this little life lives.
Color Code:
Blue = Absolute Phrases
Green = Prepositional Phrases
Yellow = Participial Phrases, notice the choice of ed or ing.
Pink = Appositive Phrases
Orange = Subordinate Clauses (SC)
A Paragraph can be ONE sentence. However, you are required to have at least 4 sentences in your response, preferably more. Have fun. Create a "mind-movie." Title your creation.
